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I think we're missing something here:
perhaps because the puppeteer
has given up and dropped our strings,
leaving us to walk in rings.
Without a hand to guide us straight
we're bound to soon accelerate
towards a crashing crescendo;
inevitably, the tumult grows.
Without the script our words are lost
and wires, once aligned, now cross –
their current, which would once flow true,
now shorts and finds a path askew.
I think we're missing something grave
but what we've lost can still be saved.
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:iconcerealnovels:
I like your use of words in this and the way they. Also I really like that it this hopeful.
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:icondanieldgriffiths:
Thanks! :)
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, just perhaps. Nicely woven.
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:icondanieldgriffiths:
Thank you! :)
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