literature

Without you near

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It's you who makes
      my dreams complete
each night between
      these lonely sheets.
These woeful words
      from my pen spill:
though you are gone
      I love you still.

I wake each morning
      hoping to
unveil my eyes
      and gaze on you.
Without you here
      I lose my will,
without you near
      my heartbeat stills.
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42. Still
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Jinxai's avatar
Really beautiful and meaningful in my opinion. Im usually not a fan of rhyming but this was nicely done. Great imagery and conveyance overall.